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Friday, October 19, 2007

Abraham's Story...in Haiku!

This week's Torah portion, Lech L'cha, from the book of Genesis, tells the story of the beginnings of Abraham's journey...and if it were in haiku, maybe it would go something like this:

Abraham, get up!
Go forth and find a new place.
You'll get a big prize!

What is my prize, God?
The stars and the sand, try to count.
I can't count that high!

That is how many
your descendents will become.
Won't you be proud, nu?

Check out Juggling Frogs for other creative ways to interpret and share the weekly Torah portion with your kids and family. This week, she's serving star-shaped chicken nuggets! Now that is creative!!!!

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6 comments:

  1. I think that is an amazing way to redo Genesis. You'll be like the new Scripture Shakespeare. Great job!

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  2. I love this!

    I've tagged you for a meme if you'd like to play.

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  3. This is fun.
    Keep those creative juices flowing!

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  4. Wow! I always dream of being able to write in Haiku! Great job.

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  5. Famine struck the land
    Abram went down to Egypt
    with Sarai his wife.

    To protect himself
    He hid his identity
    from Pharo the king.

    Beautiful Sarai
    Attracted attention from
    the kings courtiers.

    Sarai was taken
    away to the kings palace
    to become his wife.

    G-d afflicted them
    Pharaoh and his whole household
    with many strong plagues.

    "Wait a minute there!
    You said she was your sister
    Take this stuff and go."

    Back home near Beth-El,
    Avram offered Lot a deal
    to avoid arguments.

    Avram said to Lot,
    "There are too many of us,
    which side do you want?"

    Unfortunate choice:
    Lot and his clan headed East
    to Sodom Valley.

    A big brawl brewing
    in Mesopotamia
    War between nine kings.

    Abram heard the news.
    He gathered a bunch of guys
    and defeated them.

    He brought them back home
    All the people and their stuff
    And his nephew Lot.

    Malkitzedek showed
    himself to be a good guy
    showing gratitude.

    But Sodom's king
    Was quite the jerk to Avram
    Offering him deals.

    Avram said "No thanks."
    "I won't take a sandal strap
    from the likes of you."

    "Nobody will say
    Men gave me honor and wealth.
    It all comes from G-d."

    Abram remembered
    That G-d promised him nations
    but he had no kids.

    "Hey, G-d?" Abram asked
    "How is this supposed to work
    if I die childless?"

    "Not Eliezer,
    But a son of your very own
    will be the heir."

    "We can seal the deal
    with 3 cows, 3 rams, 3 goats,
    and a pair of birds."

    "Take a stroll through them.
    This brit bain habatarim:
    My promise to you."

    "You'll have countless kids,
    they'll toil in a land not their own,
    yet thrive and endure."

    Selflessly, Sarai
    Offered Hagar to Avram
    to conceive an heir.

    Hagar was unkind,
    So Sarai laid down the law
    to show who was boss.

    Hagar ran away.
    Gravid in the dessert heat
    she met an angel.

    He said to go home,
    Her son would sire a nation
    Call him Ishmael.

    At age ninety-nine
    G-d made yet another Brit,
    with his friend Abram.

    Abram would become
    Father of a multitude
    of nations and kings.

    Then G-d changed his name
    "Abram" became "Abraham"
    in remembrance.

    Circumcision marked
    the eternal covenant
    for his descendants.

    Sarai's name changed too.
    Even though they were both old
    Sarah would bear a son.

    Abraham requested
    G-d to bless Ishmael too.
    G-d did as he asked.

    But the covenant
    continues through Sarah's son
    Please name him Yitzchak.

    On that very day
    Abraham and Ishmael
    Circumcised themselves.

    May we continue
    to enjoy the blessings of
    Abraham's merits.
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    Thank you for the link,
    dear Ima on the bima
    I like your blog too!

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  6. Oops! There were eight sylables in one of them. Make that:

    "They'll toil in someone else's land"

    Shavua tov, Rabbi Phyllis!

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